So, here’s what happened.
In mid-February of 2004 I flew back to NY with Scarlett Johansson’s commitment to do the film and several of her ideas about developing K’harma’s character. Two things were now happening at once; I was in the process of incorporating her ideas into the script and I was utilizing her involvement to spur financing for the film.
RULE # 14: Life is what happens when all you want to do is close your door and write a scene.This is particularly true for the film business. Everything is in such a state of flux. An actor falls out. Another one falls in. You rewrite. You lose the money. You get the money. It snows in June. You rewrite. You adapt. This adapting is an inseparable part of screenwriting.
The writing was easy and enjoyable. I wrote a scene where K’harma and Toby end up drunk in a jacuzzi and she reveals the truth about how much her boyfriend’s rejection hurt her. It was exciting to glimpse some hidden truth behind her pop diva facade.
INT. K'HARMA'S HOTEL ROOM, JACUZZI -- NIGHT
Toby gently mimes taking K'harma's picture.
I wish I had a camera right now.
Don't. I hate people taking my picture.
It's OK. You probably don't understand, being homeless.
The worst are the paparazzi. They just don't leave you alone;
even when you're going through something really, really painful.
(crying) He broke my heart.
He said my eyes were too far apart.
That's stupid. They're not. Everybody's different;
that's what makes people beautiful.
Do you think I'm beautiful?
You're kidding, right? You're only the most
beautiful girl I've ever seen in my life.
K'harma gazes at Toby for a long moment. His honesty deeply moves her.
She leans forward and kisses him gently on the lips.
I incorporated most of Scarlett’s suggestions; not to placate her but because I truly believed they helped illuminate K’harma in a way I hadn’t seen before. The proof of this, to give away the surprise ending of this tale, is that all of her notes remained in the script even after she fell out and Alison Lohman replaced her.
The tale, like most in this business, is tired and tedious. I hooked up with a British company that committed to raise 5 million dollars to make the film based on my cast of Steve Buscemi, Michael Pitt, and Scarlett Johansson. Two years later they still hadn’t raised the money and it was clear they never would. My option with them was 8 months expired so I thanked them for their efforts and made plans to move on. And like all respectable film companies they immediately sued me.
It took several months to detangle myself from this mess. I ultimately did so with the help of Gestation, the company that ended up financing the film. What made Gestation step forward however was a gigantic decision I made about the script. At this point I’d spent over 4 years trying to raise the money and all I ended up doing was going around in circles. It became very clear to me that I was never going to make this movie for 5 million dollars. If it was ever going to be made I needed to cut the budget by at least 2 million. And the only way to cut that much out of a low-budget film is to cut the script.
Every day of shooting costs money. To reduce shooting days you need to cut pages out of the script. I wasn’t happy about this. In fact, I fought it for months. I loved the script just the way it was. I was tremendously excited about having 5 million dollars to help visually embellish the film; especially to help dramatize the difference between Les’ grimy underworld and K’harma’s glittering world of celebrity. I had never wanted Delirious to look tiny, cheap and cramped.
But I also didn’t want to spend another 5 years trying to raise the money. So, one day I took a deep breath and plunged in. In 3 weeks I cut a 117-page script down to 95 pages. And as a result I ended up with the sharpest and clearest draft of the script I’d written. The need for economical definition instantly identified anything that was vague or purposeless and shocked the script into its most concentrated form.
RULE # 15: The idiotic Kill Your Babies line.You’ve all heard this before. It means getting rid of all your precious “best thing you’ve ever written” scenes. I’ve never liked this analogy though. It’s too close to actual human behavior.
What this really means (without the threat of infanticide) is cutting and excising anything that doesn’t serve to bring the script to life. It goes back to what I said about beginning the 2nd Draft. Identify the essence of your script and actively shape everything towards it.
This is the way I approached this final draft. If a scene didn’t propel the film forward I took it out. If it meant rewriting whole passages I did. I rewrote the entire beginning of the film, which prompted a delicious discovery; an Opening Montage that showed Toby drifting through NYC, sleeping on the subway, begging for change in Times Square-all the details of his homelessness. This montage became a mini movie, 3 ½ minutes long, with its own beginning, middle and end.
Once I was done the script was re-budgeted. It came in at just over 3 million dollars based upon a 25 day shooting schedule. In August of 2005 Gestation made the decision to finance the entire film. At this stage the script was locked. It had taken me over 3 years and at least 6 drafts but I was now confident the script was done. I was ready to make the film.
And it was right then that we lost Scarlett Johansson. In those 3 years she had gone from a young, gifted actress to a super Star and now we could no longer afford her. As disappointed as I was I’d learned early on there is only one word of consolation in times like this; NEXT.
I suggest you memorize it.
I had been hugely impressed with Alison Lohman in Matchstick Men. I convinced Gestation to make her on offer. Alison said yes. I flew out to LA to meet her. She was utterly charming and bracingly clear in her thoughts about K’harma. One vital suggestion she had was to have K’harma in the middle of a lawsuit from her own parents.
Once again I flew home with an actress committed and with exciting ideas to work into the script. The big difference this time though was that I had the money. Three months later, in November of 2005, Delirious started shooting in New York City.
Oh, by the way, did I tell you about my friend Jimmy?